Last week's script and where we are standing now....

last week on week 9 , the first draft of our project script was finalised.

the feedback from the first draft was quite successful and Toula was happy with the overall theme explored in the script and the idea behind it. with her guidance i omitted some of the lines ( such as the protagonists inner dialogues with her self) .

some of them were giving the audience to much hints regard her situation ,and were blocking the opportunity for the viewer's creative instinct to predict the story behind her sadness or loneliness.

after preparing the equipments, we were ready to shoot some of the final sequences of the film ( the scenes where 5 different protagonist say the one line : because i care)

the result however wasn't really satisfying after all!

some of the scenes we shot did not evoke that sense of emotion of care or compassion for others.

for instance all of the scenes were shot with a tripod,therefore it looked as if all scenes were so rigid ,stiff and lacked that innovative quality about it. so we thought all of the scenes we shot will be shot again , however we will keep these footage for the sake of editing purposes.